Speeh 2 Redo

Our last assignment this week was to redo the second speech. After the critiques this should improve our performance. The teacher critiques were to not say, "umm" and not to "lip smack", so I this is the redo:


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Nice improvements .. It's hard to not say 'um' .. i say that all the time when Im trying to thing of what to say. When I worked in Italy people would say 'Allora' instead of 'um' .. I always thought it was cool, and much beter than ummmmm

I think you did great dude. Not saying 'umm' is definitely challenging - I tend to do that too. I like your air boxing technique.

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