Advanced Type Class
So this project was to use a single letter as the main focal point of the design. The object was to pick a product and design a full package for that product using the one single letter.
Here is mine.
" Steven,
Your final design has come a long way from your thumbnails. The extra information on the package helps to make the design look more complete. One thing to be aware of as we continue through the course would be to work on the placement and line spacing of the copy. Currently, your small type is too far apart and your large font is too close together. Also, you have several typos which reduce the overall professionalism of the design. Don't forget that you can learn a lot by observing packaging as you're walking through a store.
Overall, you did a pretty good job on the composition.
William"
S: Good color choices I think for this product, nice and earthly. It sounds like your instructor has noticed gradual improvement in your work which is great. Small suggestion - type out your text in Microsoft word before putting it in your design, that way any spelling/grammar corrections can be caught by spell checker.